-Scars 2.0-

after submitting the previous -scars- for review, i was contacted by chewedkandi: [link] who recommended that i reedit this particular pome as the six words as of themselves did not come across as a story but rather as a declarative statement (i am paraphrasing her exact words but this is basicly what she said) she was very nice about this and said i could resubmit this after the changes were made if i chose to do so... since i have already had comments on the first, i am adding a second version as well.