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meditative state
breathing slows, focused
(the) distant sound of crows
breathing slows, focused
(the) distant sound of crows
my response to -saiun- and his haiku: <da:thumb id="506300465"> which is part of this months (january 2015) renga tree collaboration... feel free to add your own voice to the ever expanding branches on this tree
overnight update:
additional thanks need to go to -jade-pandora- jade-pandora.deviantart.com/ for her insight and thoughtful suggestions in regards to my excessive use of ellipses and correction of punctuation (which i'll admit needed improvement) the comments section shows just how much her insight improved this verse
overnight update:
additional thanks need to go to -jade-pandora- jade-pandora.deviantart.com/ for her insight and thoughtful suggestions in regards to my excessive use of ellipses and correction of punctuation (which i'll admit needed improvement) the comments section shows just how much her insight improved this verse
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