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wounded without knowing;
silent bleeding as we spoke.
when you turned, I fell away.
silent bleeding as we spoke.
when you turned, I fell away.
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Many, many thanks to -twilightpoetess- [link]
for her advice on the correct placement and usage of punctuation within this haiku which greatly improved it’s clarity and readability
for her advice on the correct placement and usage of punctuation within this haiku which greatly improved it’s clarity and readability
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