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Published: Sep 7, 2011

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Literature Text

falling, unseen
as you turn away
tears adding to the rain

written in response to the haiku by -mcdermid- found here:
[link] which is part of the September Renga Tree sponsored by -The Haiku Club- found here:

[link]

feel free to add your own thoughts to this verse

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This is similar in theme to one I was trying to write as a response to one by Saiun - great minds think alike, but yours as greater clarity than mine, I think.